Review by AudieCockings
Oct 7 2014
 
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Things you can't undo...
This is a perfect short telling the often ignored fact of immense regret. There are things in this life that can't be undone. The subject of this story is paramount among those things. If only the aftermath was shared with women before they throw away the love of their lives. I really enjoyed how the author illustrated that hasty decisions such as these leave a lifetime of scars. But she well presents the morbid subject with a tenderness only a mother could offer...I enjoyed reading it very much.
Review by theloniousmonk
Apr 3 2014
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Beautiful
Thanks for the blessing. The law of unintended consequences illustrated so well.
Review by jnampion
Apr 3 2014
 
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Awesome
Not a lot more to say....
Review by ffleming
Mar 8 2014
 
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Consequence of Choices
A very devastating look at the consequence of the choices we make. I was riveted from beginning to end.
Review by ErichForschler
Mar 3 2014
 
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Haunting.
Definitely an interesting and provocative piece. It planted questions in my mind about "what happens when...?" Humans are arrogant enough to think we know the answers. It's a little sad, but necessarily so. Overall, the calm cadence of the prose makes it seem that much creepier. Very good story.
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